Dreamtalia screenshot Artist Contest + Speedpaint

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I don't know how I can fix the colours. All my drawings on the computer are more pale/faint than on tablet or mobile phone
on tablet or mobile phone they are so full and loud. Just too strong and bright.
Please tell me how you see the drawing. I prefer it to be more pale/faint, so don't judge it for being too strong and bright because that is not my fault. fuck.  PLEASE TELL ME

anyway this my entry for 's contest
and lol, I am so bad at drawing hands and I haven't studied Italy's clothes enough
and backgrounds is there a senpai who can teach me how to draw backgrounds?
and please download it to see it better. (or it is recommend to just make it bigger) But don't mind the crappy tree when dowloading it. I know that it looks like shit. I just don't know what pencils to use for backgrounds. I never downloaded any extra pencils

Speedpaint:www.youtube.com/watch?v=XwPqKS…